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Can Do 3—Part 4

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It's a Christmas present. :)

It's more sexfighting. ;)

It's not done yet. :(

Remember when I said Part 4 was the end? After nearly 16,000 words, I gave up. There will be a Part 5. And, I promise, really really really really promise, it will be the end. I think.

Here's a sort of spoiler. There is what some may consider a too short sexfight between Ronja Lindsrom (Swede) and Yelena Tarasenko (Russian). Cynthia may be disappointed. The spoiler is: they aren't done yet.

And so, Trinity and Zenova work through the twists and turns of their evolving relationship. Twist and turn is both figurative and literal. Could it be that Trinity has finally found someone who isn't interested in using her? Does it matter that Zenova still expects to win the sexfight championship and, further, expects Trinity to be happy with that? What happens when Trinity goes with Zenova to watch her sexfight—with a complete stranger? Well, not a complete stranger. Ah, the joys of writing a really schmaltzy soap opera.

Here it is. As always, comments of any kind are appreciated.

Can Do-3 - Part 4

 

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I write as a hobby. It calms the nerves. I got my start when The Wicked dared me to write something he could read. So I did. And here I am.

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  • cynthia
    cynthia Monday, 26 December 2016

    thank for story christmasI adore in the text mention combat between Japanese and Jamaican I believe your story should be oriented towards that shorter history of 10 page max history there would be more focus in the sexfight and oddly you with the same story end as (((A Night in prague))))) or police intervene to finish almost history on this I repeat but I believe history between 7 to 10 page would be ideal as in author jason j honz and story or serie Rough Rider Club thankkkkk

  • labeltornoff
    labeltornoff Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    Thanks for the comments. I hope you are enjoying the sexfight between Ronja and Yelena. There is more to come from them. I didn't realize I'd imitated A Night in Prague for the ending. Oh, well, I steal from the best. :D

    I think you are right. I will try for some shorter parts, beginning with the sexfight between Zenova and Siobhán. We'll see if I can write something shorter.

    Do you have samples of Jason J Hong's writin?. I'd like to compare them to mine.

  • cynthia
    cynthia Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    Is it really necessary to talk about their life at home or their training aussie long ??? I believe if history would orientate more towards the sexfight sense of having their story come to deprive and it would be better also to write less a book then yes thank

  • labeltornoff
    labeltornoff Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    I can write short stories that start with the fight and end with the winner insulting the loser. When I am finished, I don't like what I have written. I want to know why the women fight. I want to know if they care about winning or losing. Is it money? Is it fame? Are they just crazy? Besides, the parts between fights let you catch your breath for the next one. ;)

  • cynthia
    cynthia Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    Money and glory crush the other and read finish takeuchi vs meynell ..very good raise arm and make pose of muscle and water his rival of his hot sperm good

  • cynthia
    cynthia Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    thankTraduire

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    337/5000
    The sexfight between japanese and jamaican, just one more page was excellent but would have been very good with 1 page more with nice japanese finish good ... for text mention you can go read a preview of Series: Rough Rider Club RRC) S1
    By Jason J. Honz on https://www.smashwords.com/books/byseries/23837

  • Garren
    Garren Monday, 26 December 2016

    That was a wonderful Christmas gift. Can't wait for the next part.

  • labeltornoff
    labeltornoff Tuesday, 27 December 2016

    Thanks, Garren. I hope you enjoy it.

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